My Poem: Change

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by mouse6687 (I am #1) on Friday, 21-Nov-2008 16:16:45

Change


Now is the time I take back my life

I will no longer be here

The me that you once knew will no longer be

It starts here

It starts now

The new me will be superb

Unreconizable

I will be the envied one

You'll just be a prop in my scene change

The world spinning around you full of hate

My time is now

The future is mine

Post 2 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Monday, 24-Nov-2008 15:17:42

This poem was all right. Are you trying to explain some concepts about who you are and how you want to be recognized ones you've changed? It was clear near end that you were preparing for something related to the future. I think there's a story behind this poem. You just got to be more specific with your word of choice because sometimes, its a little vague.